Awww very sweet!

Such a sweet poem...lovely flow...nice work :)

Thanks for the comments. Sorry I haven't been commenting yet, but I'll be getting to more of yours soon, just been a little busy.

xxx

Just where your heart should really be
i like the way you worded that, it made it that much better.
that together is where we will always be
that's so cute!
i loved this, the ryming scheme is perfect, the structure perfect, and the flow works great. nice job! 5/5

Good one