Comments : My prayer

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Short and got right to the point. i liked it alot. good choice of words

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    The last line is very beautiful and creates a lovely image. I'm sorry, i forgot to write in My Challenge that if you attempt I will r/r/c on 2 of your poems.
    but you do not know the why, when, or how
    i suggest you get rid of 'the'.
    nice poem, the idea was well done, the rymeing scheme was great, and the structure was unique. good job, 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Whoah.... that was so amazing. just by reading one piece, i can already tell your an awesome poet. 5/5 also, its all completely true

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Love the emotion you put into this one, I'll have to give you a 5!

  • I Loved It Loved It Loved It! What More Can I Say Than 5.0?...This Poem Burst With Talent And Skill, I Can Tell That You Write From The Heart *Hugs* *Friends For Life* 5/5 All The Way! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo