Comments : Mother To Child

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "I've crossed bridges in life
    that threatened to fall" i love those lines, because they are so true. about taking chances in life and just hope that it works out for the best! you have a lot of great lines through out the poem. keep up the good work!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    JJ,
    We do have to cross those bridges and climb those mountains and we can't always stay at the top...there will be times we fall. But it only makes us stronger and we learn to survive. Beautiful poem and so true.

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by lil shorty

    This is tha best poem!! and o so true! keep up tha good work and i hope to hear more poems from you soon

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    Wow... very inspirational. absolutely wonderful!!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by wendy

    Great job keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That gave me a knot in my throat! That gave me tears in my eyes. But it did put a smile on my face because when I read it, more then anything the message I got was you've learned from your mistakes! This was a gorgeous poem JJ and the next time you fall get right back up because you'll still be shining like you are now! Much love to you!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    There are definately no short cuts in life and no free lunches. Anything worthwhile is always hard work and this poem is so very worthwhile to read. Amazing!

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Very sweet poem.A great poem about the ups and downs of life .I think it well deserevs a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    JJ that is an amazing poem and words to live by. Never give in. WoW!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    WOW!! Lost at words. Amazing!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Congrats....dear heart....well deserved.

    Love Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by ebony-rose

    Good i like it although i dont really understanding it, deep and symbolic.

  • 12 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    O....that was a really sweet poem. : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Cute poem...

  • 12 years ago

    by Rosie

    Great poem, truely inspiring *smiles* keep the good work. Rosie xXx

  • I loves this poem as it is so true to all our lives. as we go through life we have to make desions and well they dont always seem to eb the right ones and this tells us of this keep writing i loved it
    *huggels*
    loves emmie xxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    Well done, in particular I like the last stanza. It is the perfect ending and sums up all that you are writing about.

  • 12 years ago

    by Desiree

    It really warmed my heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber Collins

    Great Poem! Awsome use of words. Sent chills up my spine. Good job!:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lindsay

    This poem was really inspirational, it makes you think alot about what life is. Your very talented keep it up!