Comments : Appearances

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    I loved it. Its soo true. I hate labeling. Im gettin ready to write a poem about it. Excellent! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Omg this is good, i was thinking about what im gonna wear tomorrow, and i was afraid of what people would say, but now, i dont care, thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow what a amazing job you flow was good keep it up oh nice subject and your right people do judge peopl on there appearances. nice job 5.5

  • Yep i totally agree u shouldn't judge anyone for what they wear... and infact Religoun/race/colour/sexuality...
    Great poem...x

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    It was really good and it flowed really good as weel keep it up =)

    Clαяissα ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I liked the two repeating lines that you used, it was a powerful way to begin and end the poem. It's true people are often judged by appearances.
    I think you have a typo in the third stanza, second line. You said "they" and I think you meant "the."
    Good job, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Creative! it was different and it was good!! i really liked it. the flow was amazing so that was a big bonus. 5/5 for sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    I love it hun it has such a true message behind it! xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Suzy

    Heey this is an awsome poem! i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for the read lol :) love suzy xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    It's soo beautiful !
    Just as the message in it.
    Lovely work !

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    I really like this peom. A lot of my work is around such subjects as this, I find the social order of todays teenage society horrible.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like the idea of the poem, you are completely right. I also like the energy you have in your poetry. Your personality shines through. :)

    Thanks for the comment on my poem.

  • Hey whassup? I like this one alot!!!!!
    Bye!
    Lurvs
    ~Miranda~

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    You are absolutely right! People should not judge people on how they look.. Everyone is beautiful in some way.. Great write hun!

    !^I Love Being In Love^!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow i love this poem it was excellent!!

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Aww that was so good... i loved it soo much . keep up the great work 5/5

    take care
    thanks for sharing
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I like this poem alot too, And i agree, People shouldnt judge people by what they wear, Or from anything else in that fact. Never judge a book by its cover! hehe, Great poem. Keep it up :P 5/5

    - natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    5/5 nice one....one of the best you have done so far!

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow great job on this one.. Its true todays society labels us as something we're not... its reallly stupid but let people be stupid as long as you dont believe it yourself right? Great message for people who are afraid of other people's judgements! awesome write ;)

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