Comments : Instead of all the fake

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I love it! Keep up the good work and thanks for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    I like this poem i can really relate to it good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Amazing! please comment on mine Lx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Ok ill write a poem :D This was good and so true! Well done. "We cry for the ones who doesn't care," it would flow better if it was one not ones! keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Ahhhh that is SOOO GOOD the poem was good but im talking about the point your making it makes me want to go write a poem about all the people who are good makes me realize how negative of a person i am if you can write a poem that helps someone realize something about themselves your amazing....great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I really liked this poem. But to me it could go in the miscellaneous because yes it said about love ones but then it kept on saying of writing a poem about this and that. Just wondering. Maybe it's just because you wanted it in the love is section or something. But anyway enough with that. But i did like your poem. Your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5 good one ! yup... why fake after all/... writing a poem is such a emotional release...
    ps: pls check my poem " murder or suicide"

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah

    Its really amazing!!!!!!!!!! wow such talent for a 14 year old!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem.I like the way it was written.

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Wow. i liked that a lot. but mostly all my poems are about...all the fake. but i do have like a couple about the real ones...anyways, awesome poem. really loved it. 5/5

  • Amazing...all your poems are so awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by I finally found true LOVE

    That was really good becaue u just made me notice that all i do is write poems about the people who have broken my heart and i don't acknowledge the one's who treat me with respect.

    THANKS!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow.
    its great...
    really makes you think. everyone writes poems about people who have hurt them about people who dont care... there arent as many poems about the people who matter, the ones who care...

    well done

    Jacs
    xxx

  • Wonderful Job!!! WOW such talent for a 14 year old!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    I love it! Keep up the good work,....its reli gud 4 14. keep writing! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    Dam....... you know how to express your self don't you you got a 5/5 from me holla