Wow ash, awesome poem. keep up the good work. You're not realy pregnant are you.

Wow, amazing, your poems are getting greater than I thought. Keep it up! 5!!!! ;) =)

Marielys

You could definitly make alot of improvments. although it was a story ir should rhyme. some parts did but..it didnt have a flow

Oh yea it did a flow andrea! This poem is absolutely amazing.