Comments : The last shards of a forlorn hope

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyn

    Beautiful again. I love the way you say so much without wasting a word. It flows and flows and flows again.

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I have written like that. What a great poem to read. :)

  • Gorgeous, especially
    " writing poetry to shield myself
    from the nil desperandum "

    and the last stanza

    wow, just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Comment sent by ELIZABETH T.

    I understand this because I know. I think we all have been somewhere at sometime in our lives and the music won't stop playing. And there are moments when we want the whole world to stop and let us dream and let us go to that moment that we hold so close to our heart. But we live on and always never, ever forget. "Remind me to forget".
    Take care, Elizabeth T.

  • 11 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Incredible is it that you can write what I cannot say..and then I read it and I think, yes thats exactly it!