Another great poem. keep up the good work

Wow thsi is a great poem!!i loved it!!i can so relate to this one!!hopefully your happy now??!!well i can tell how much u miss and love him. great work on it!! :)

Omg...this is such a touching poem....i can relate so well...it isnt even funny!! this poem seriously KICKS....um...butt haha way more then mine

This was an excellent poem! u had some spelling mistakes, tho, and i thought in th second line, you should remove the "that". Most people put "that" in a place that doesn't really need it, and that would make ur poem sound better. Also, you used it in the first line, so it makes you sound like ur repeating ur self. I really like the poem, tho...it was full of emotions, and it reminds me of who i feel right now with losing my friends. I really enjoyed this! 5.5 keep up the good work.

Great Poem! 5!

Great job even though im crying. i loved it and i know how it feels to be like this. i hope everything works out

That Was Good Enough To Be a Song, I Liked The Flow Of The Poem, The Message You Displayed And The Talent Put Forth Into This Masterpiece 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Excellent poem...5/5 of course !!! breath taking & sweet !!!
pls chk "murder or suicide" could u vote & comment like i did urs...
love amy

Awesome job..I would write more but I have to go bye
ash

Very sad, very sad... A very good poem, and it was really something, great job. ^_^x

Wonderful, just plain wonderful I like how you don't care if your poems have the same amout of lines in each verse it shows that you have real character. great work andI hope to see mor great poems from you !! 5/5
Lots O' Love
BloodRedRose

I really like your poem from the title down to the last line. keep writing. pls. visit my poems to. Check out my last poem The Girl i never had if u have time!

This was rly plush i can so relate with this, with me and my ex, cos i want himso badly bk, made me think kl

xxxxur guardian angelxxx

That was really good. and im sorry you have to miss somebody like that. I know how it feels. but awesome job. 5/5~

Very good dear,very good! ok,where'd that come from? lol .great job on your poem! its kinda sad, but sweet in the same way! keep up the good work,and i look forward to reading more from you! ^_^

I liked it.

Ur poem brought me 2 tears bcoz dats how i felt bout mah ex man

I really like this, I relate to it alot, and so does my best friend. I like how you worded it, and kept the first line the same...not many people can do that. Good job!

I really like that !!

it really good !!!

GREAT JOB id have to say !!!!!

Hey this was a great poem!You are a very good poet!Keep up the good work!
Luv Becklin(SMILES)