That was a beautiful poem, it almost made me cry how great it was. I was so happy, you make me want to write a poem about what I want in a guy... (I think I might) but I am so against copeying so I will think from the heart like you did. You are an inspiration, thank you for the poem!
Nice poem. made me cry still tearing, its just it reminds me of how i was with my gf. Always would do that stuff for her and she woudl love it just to see that smile on her face those tears in her eyes made it worth the time and the trouble it took to do something for her. Most of all it makes me miss her and the stuff we used to do. She moved away and her dad wont let us talk anymore. Anyways nice poem 5.0 easily.
Once again its amazing, your poem.. all my friends that are girls want that kind of guy and i think that every girls dream guy. Keep looking ladies theres guys like that out there that arent taken or there are guys out there that are taken and not appreciated, find one of them and make them your own..... anyways your poem is "b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l"
I first saw this poem i was like she want a lot and life is 2 short to be picky, but after i read it i waz touched. i blieve that everygurl deserve a guy lyke dat, but they are very rarely, keep up the good work. i love the poem
This was great. I think it would have been cool if, since u called him a "boy" through out the whole thing, you said something like "I guess what i really need is a Man then." at the end cause if he had all that he wouldn't really be a "boy" would he? Anyway, just a little feedback, hope u don't mind. sry if i said something wrong. keep it up though!
Aww..... I want a boy just like that one. But it's impossible, no boy is all that. Even down to the simplest requests, to make you laugh when you promised him you wouldn't. Aww... so funny and sweet and romantic. *sigh* You made me daydream...