Great poem. A bit sad but amazing!

Omg that poem is so good thats how i feel about this one guy that i like.

5/5 ...this should be the definition of desired love.

Just a tad bit sad...but i absolutly loved it...it shows your feelings so well 5/5

Woah..speechless.. asliegh gurl it was amazing!! but i hope ur ok mwas

Again, really nice, i can relate to this and i like the way you've writen it.

xxx cici xxx

Really sweet poem... even though im bawling my eyes out, love is making me depressed, but it really is well written

I totally know how you feel, and i feel the same way. i've found a few tiny spelling/grammatical erroes: 'Laying in my bed' should be 'Lying in my bed ', 'met' in stanza 5, sentance one should be 'meet'. thats about it. awesome poem; 5/5

That is exactly how I now but I don't have anything, including a house b/c of Katrina. GeREAT POEM! I enjoyed it VERY much! :)

Awwww its so cute and that boy better appreciate u writing these poems for him...but if he doesn't then u r just wasting ur time...ur very talented and i really look up to u....keep up the GREAT work