Comments : I Do

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw this is so sweet!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was awesome very good it flowed so good and was beatiful your talented 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww that was really good, this "so called love" sounds amazing, but hurts so bad when its over, doesn't it, great poem, i enjoyed it alot, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    That is indeed a very sweet poem. Girls write love poems way better than guys. But that doesnt mean we don't have emotions!!! I put the EMOin EMOtions haha! nice write ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Aw, thats adorable

  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    .w0w s0 beautiful!!! s0 sweet n nice!!
    beautifulyl written darl!! very nice!!
    y0u t0o kEeP up the grEat w0rK!!
    thank y0u s0 mUcH f0r the c0mment
    0n my w0rK! it meant al0t!! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • Beautiful poem, really well written !!

    XXX CICI XXX

  • 12 years ago

    by Erica

    This is so sweet?did u write this for dylan?

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple

    This is soo sweet and loving. It's ovously from the heart and full of emotoin, I can really only hope that you continue feeling this way a long long time after you are wed. It was wonderfully sweet and had a buitifull flow and general feeling.

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple

    Oh and I live around lansing.

  • 12 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Awww u should read this to dylan he would love it i think idk maybe O_o

  • 12 years ago

    by camille

    OMG i liked it.
    5/5 girl! ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by John Bender

    That was a very good poem. Very heart warming I gave it a 5 all the way :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle

    This is an absolutely beautiful poem. It has a lot of emotion in it that just makes it wonderful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Well,.. honestly,.. this was fulll of cliche's.. the emotion there, but it gets desensitized because you're using widely-used terms.. im sure you could express your love in a unique way.. its not a bad poem at all... but to me it loses a lot of quality as it has so many lines i've heard before.. it sounds like im makin it out worse than it is.. but thats just my thoughts.. i know its prolly based off true raw emotion, but you need to forge that emotion through words, or phrases, that havnt been used b4.. good job th0.. just keep writin! 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So beautiful and sweet, made me think about my boyfriend and how lucky I am......You did an excellent job, so emotional and deep, keep them coming....=0)

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by amelia

    Is a beautiful poem ... so full of looove & loooooooove all the way !!
    all i can say is "lucky boyfriend" !!
    god bless u both
    5/5
    amy

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Lovely!!!

  • This poem is very good and touching. great job at explaning how you feel... 5/5..wonderful..
    Crystal

  • 12 years ago

    by **Ashleigh*Sue**

    AWWW this is reali cute. i love it alot. well it's great just like you. 5/5 love ya gurl. keep up ur f'in awesome poems. yeah well love ya always,
    ***aShLeIgH***