.w0w s0 beautiful!!! s0 sweet n nice!!
beautifulyl written darl!! very nice!!
y0u t0o kEeP up the grEat w0rK!!
thank y0u s0 mUcH f0r the c0mment
0n my w0rK! it meant al0t!! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
This is soo sweet and loving. It's ovously from the heart and full of emotoin, I can really only hope that you continue feeling this way a long long time after you are wed. It was wonderfully sweet and had a buitifull flow and general feeling.
Well,.. honestly,.. this was fulll of cliche's.. the emotion there, but it gets desensitized because you're using widely-used terms.. im sure you could express your love in a unique way.. its not a bad poem at all... but to me it loses a lot of quality as it has so many lines i've heard before.. it sounds like im makin it out worse than it is.. but thats just my thoughts.. i know its prolly based off true raw emotion, but you need to forge that emotion through words, or phrases, that havnt been used b4.. good job th0.. just keep writin! 4/5