I had to read this several time before i got the jist of it but other that that i thought it was very good, very meaingful. Take care,

Hippie

Awwwwwwww...i get the vibe that its more of a love poem thoe...its still good...i gave you a 5/5...u deserved it...i love the way you write and never change the way you are for somebody else...kisses

Aw how sweet its exactly how i feel about my boyfriend! 5/5

Hey, so short, cute and sweet! Very nice.
Oh, and thanks for commenting on my poem.
See ya!

Very nice, my favorite so far from you. I simply loved your content here, and I truly mean that.

Abcdcba...nice...u don't c much of that any more. keep it up

It's short and simple and has a great point.

My favourite lines were:

"can you give me a reason? a chance to be free?
let me out of this prison, i'm offering you the key"

And..

"all i need is a friend, let's try it for a while
all i'm asking from you, is a reason to smile "

Good job, M'Lovely. =)

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Its beautiful crystal... "all im asking for is a reason to smile"...wow ! its funny how in life even that seems so impoossible
good poem small & nice
5/5
amy

I feel that way about a guy now! I love it!

That was very good good job 5/5

Yum great poem!

This poems very good. I think its ok the lengh it is, but maybe a few more lines would be good.