Woah... asliegh gurl another awesome poem from u:):) really really good!!! i love ya heaps xoxoxo... btw i love the way u write ur poems and use a varitey of wors :) maybe one day u can help me 2 do that

Amazingly written ^_^

Hey great job! great emotion and feelings. its heartfelt and very tearful, but its great and i love it!

Hey darl great j0b 0n this p0em. t0uching n meaningful l0t 0f em0ti0n in this 0ne. kEeP it up
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
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A good poem, some real instances of heartache and sorrow. I like the descriptions of tears... A good piece!

Beautiful, heart-wrenching and sorrowful, very nice, though!

Good Writing!
beth

Another amazing write from you.
You never cease to amaze me.
5/5 none to less. take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

VERY GOOD POEM YOUR CAN WRITE VERY GOOD 5/5

I think i may of read this before... but either way its well written, very emotional and touching.. well done

This is really good. 5/5 Loved it!
Keep it up you have talent!
Becky
xoxo

DAMN!
Easily your best yet! Although i never really minded mechanics, this is cleaned up much better than usual, and you're getting better and better at this. I'm amazed at what you can turn out.

I've seen two awkward lines in this poem: 'The joy lost that with him I have only ever found,' and him on my mind can I only ever find,'. for the second sentance, you start of saying 'you', as you are referring to a guy, then you switch to him. you should focus on one POV, and not switch them around. dont be too offended, though; i do it all the time.otherwise, awesome poem. 5/5

Second stanza pretty shaky. But last part is good. Keep it up. =]

Nice job, very creative details. ~some spots didn't flow as well

That was really good and I enjoyed reading it! Great job!

WOA! A M A Z I N G!!!!! 5555555///10

Wow, a poem that has all the great elements to make it great. A job wel done. ^_^x sorry for not reviewing earlier.

Okay i dont think this is as good as your last one granted you wrote it in a class period sometimes i think it wasnted to rhyme but the rhyme scheme was messy and stuff so i dont know and when you did rhyme it was forced

Ashleigh you did it again, girl. I loved it.
Much love,
Nana

I liked it.
I thought you used some interesting imagery and concepts there, such as the "ocean of tears."