Thats a awesome poem n i can relate to it to... but good job!

Niceee 5/5

Awww, hun. This is a GREAT poem!!!!!!! Keep up the great work! I felt the emotion! Awesome job!
~BJ~

Hey sweetie that is so good
i can realate in so many ways babe keep writing take care mwa

Hey sweetie that is so good
i can realate in so many ways babe keep writing take care mwa

Nicely done, very nice job!!!

Thanks all,
This is special to me, I have really written it for my girl!! it relates so much to my situation!

Thanks for you comments anyway!

I know I don't have a single chance
to be with you
I feel there are too much differences
maybe its true

This stanza seems slightly out of place with the 2 shorter lines, but still, good emotional poem. Nice work x

Nice poem 5/5

Very nice poem, man ali.. i know how you feel, to big diffrence between you and the girl and you know it wont work out, i was in ur situation, i told her i love her and she was mine but then we were forced to break up due to our big diffrences, it was heart breaking, we were still so in love.. so we stayed friends but we were still in love so we told each other we love each other until a day she said she lost the feeling, shes hiding it now..
i still wake up at night and cant sleep..

just think before you do anything..