Wow, Ash! nice rhyming! I havent seen you online, are you ok? get online when you can, amazing poem! =)

Marielys

This is a beautiful piece of poetry i wish ur ex reads this
love
amy
5/5

Cute, and nice. I hope u find someone who really cares.

Good Writing!
beth

Well its a sweet thing to write but in my eyes its less like a poem and more like a letter to an exboyfriend ... now i know its all on how ya look at it and its truely the way you feel so thats great but i really think it could be so much better if it were worded a little diffrent just for exampel you start out the poem with 4 lines per stanza then it goes to 3 then back to 4 with rhyme in some parts and not others sorry to be so critical i really like your emotion that you show just needs some work on the layout

This is really good 5/5 deffinately
Becky
xoxo

I loved the first stanza this is a cute poem i think its very sweet the only thing i think it is in need of is that i think you need to tell us why you cant be with him right now...cause now im curoius lol...good job though 5/5

Awww...so sweet and i like that u would wait for that guy for such a long time...i did the same and it worked out for the best....good luck to u...5/5...keep it up

Aw, this is a really beautiful poem, i like it alot.

xxx cici xxx

I didnt understand this line:
What some one to hold ....you might wanna fix that i think you put what instead of want? i dunno but great poem...5/5...so sweet

WOW....thats a very Beautiful poem thats filled with love I know it came from the heart...and I can relate so very much I've been waiting on someone myself I just hope she see's that I'm always here for her no matter what...anyway Excellent job and thank you for the lovely comments :) 5/5