Although it could have fared better in a more stereotypical poetry format, I enjoyed it. Title ideas are:

I Want To Be the One
Secretive Sight
Your Eyes

Lol i dont know why im posting here i get problems nameing my poems i really like this poem think its very touching and great content

"the tell me of the pain, of your longing to be loved"

I think you meant "they"

"the tell the story of your life"

I think you meant "they"

As for titles suggestions:

â—Š Closed Eyes

â—Š Beneath Your Smile

◊ Façade

That's all I have, M'lovely. =)

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Facade*

Sorry for the mistakes.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I'd call it "don't pretend" or "you don't have to pretend anymore" great poem, be proud!!!!

much love,
sammi

Maybe the title should be the eyes of pain since there's so much pain, right?

Anyway, nice one...

Wow that was amazing!