I really like this poem. it was really diffrent i really liked it. keep up the good work.

Emma5/5

That was awsome, i love vampires hehe, great poem

I like vampires quite a bit, and you certainly captured their darkness and beauty here...very good.

Good Writing!
beth

Again wonderful !!!! You misspelled piercing, but other then that I envy you . lol 5/5

Ooh...vampires. Are a member of Quizilla.com?

WOW!
POWERFUL
great work ruby
so descriptive
may i ask though
are you a vampire?!?
The garlic teaser

That was so beautiful. I could picture it so clearly in my head. You are really talented. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

That was SO AWESOME
omg, wow
breath taking piece of work
i absolutely loved it
love
~Em

Really great job, that last stanza was amazing... keep it up!