I like how it ends. Really good job and neat idea. keep writing! Thanks for the comment:)

I like it. Good job. I gave it a five out of five. It also flows really reallt well.

(If you go back and look at my The Way poem I wrote a thing at the bottom, since the last line tends to be a bit confusing.)
xxMegxx

Well the flow is a little off and i guess there wasnt supposed to be any kind of set form....but the ending was AMAZING i loved the ending that was great i was like this is an okay poem and then there was the ending and i was like damn this is a great poem lol good job 5/5

Great writem I can relate thanks so much for r/c on my poem

love always

natalie

Wow!! Amazing!!!! 5.5 wow! this is lovely!! I love your style, your full of talent!! Amazing!! 5.5 I'm really surprised! Amazing poem!! wow! 5.5 DEFINETILY! Love, Hugs!!

Marielys

0hhh t0uching lines. very well writen hun!
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Very thoughtful...I like it!

Amazing job. that's how i feel but even worse also i need to write a poem after i'm done leaving you comments on the poems you told me to read. But anyway you did an amazing job once again and you are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Damn.
Good job.
Hopefully this is just figurative suicide.

I wish i could say i loved it but i didn't get to much emotion out of it, and I really got lost easy, but I would say The flow was well, and A nice poem all and all.

Another beautifuly written piece, i liked it alot.
I'm adding you to my favourites !!!

xxx cici xxx

This is so sad. great writing!

Yet another great write by you.
I loved it 5/5 none to less.
Keep your head up xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow, that's so sad
But great writing!
I love it, 5/5 again

Again great job i loved it 5/5

That was great..and so true. I hope you're ok...no one should have to go through those feelings because of someone.
take care xxoxo

Well thank you for the comment and what not and yeah i know my stuffs not crap but its all good yeah i loved this one as well and i can tell it comes from the heart