Great poem! 5/5 but u need question marks at the end of "what is happiness" and some of the other lines. but good job chika!
hannah

Good job gurlie!!! very nice...5/5

Great work! You should proofread though. Awesome.

Great poem, apart from the errors previously pointed out lol. nooo worries! happiness will find you. its just sidetracked with me at the moment.

This was excellent, I really liked this.
I thought it flowed very well, and I enjoyed the imagery.

This poem is so good, I've been thinking about this for so long, I can really relate