I have never read a better poem than this one, it's brilliant and so well written, it's just perfect, perfect flow and perfect rhyming, I am amazed....Let me answer all the questions: I really really do understand, I have been through it all, except from the drugs....I know where your pain is coming from and you know I am feeling it too...GirÃ¦ I am always here for you no matter what.
Oh wow !!
Really powerful poem, i LOVE it !! Your choice of words are great. You've written a poem about something that is nearly always a difficult subject for people to talk about. I can totally relate to this. You've written this beautifully, even though the subject is fairly depressing.
I liked this alot but some people do actually know how you feel even if the circumstances arn't exactly the same the pain people feel can alot of times be pretty similer...
Do you have the scars I have
That decorate your wrist?
And if you try to smile
Do you smile with a twist?
that was my favorite line this was very good i loved this poem alot, its one of the few cutting poems i will remember i dont know why but i just got like this dark bloody knife in my head the whole time i was reading this so i think thats pretty cool the effect of the poem great job 5/5
Superb write, Tina. This comes from the heart, that much is quite obvious. Thank you for having the cleverness to put some depth into this topic and pulling away from the stereotypical "Woe is me, I think I'll cut myself now" kind of thing that is so common. Although I know I don't understand cutting, and probably never will, maybe you could try to see that those that offer you advice just want the best for you, and even if they can't help, they are trying. Excellent, Excellent, EXCELLENT poem.
I really like your poem it really describes what people who cut feel its like if you do end up telling someone they'll either think you are a freak or tell you to stop soing the only thing that makes you feel better.