THIS POEM REALLY REMINDS ME OF ME BUT MY DADS A D*** SO YEAH WELL I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM

Oh my gosh! this is so good it was really sad but you did an awesome job ending it anyways 5/5
take care,

holly

I was not expecting it to end that way. What an awesome twist! Sad that so many really do live life that way - even worse that some times it doesn't end so sweet! Incredible write Luanne.

Wow thats great it made me cry. great job keep it up.

thanks for the comment

Wow! This is so nicely written! A wonderful poem & a great style of writing!

Wonderful poem I love the ending. the whole poem was great.
~neens~

Wonderful poem I love the ending. the whole poem was great.
~neens~

It's a wonderful poem. Very well written! Great job!

Perfect story. dramatic plots, and great ending...You are a wonderful story teller... Glad that I decided to read your poetry... I give you two thumbs up and a rating of a 5*

Aww this is so good :)

Love it again 5/5

Hey thats an amazing poem.
so sad.
wut gave you the idea? did u actually know someone that that happened to? or was it you. msg me back
goodjob keep it up :) :)

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

This was nice.. the ending was quite unexpected, it gave a sense of hope

I've loved this poem ever since i first read it back in like 05-06 around that time... Its so cool the way you wrote it, and the last parts where her dad calls her just before shes about to kill herself, its awesome!

OMG best poem on this website I swear to god so much emotion is in this poem i thought it would end so different omg omg omg I'm speechless I envy your work soooooooooooooo much !!

OMG best poem on this website I swear to god so much emotion is in this poem i thought it would end so different omg omg omg I'm speechless I envy your work soooooooooooooo much !!

Beautiful. :)