Comments : The Call

  • 18 years ago

    by MISSING HIM

    THIS POEM REALLY REMINDS ME OF ME BUT MY DADS A D*** SO YEAH WELL I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Oh my gosh! this is so good it was really sad but you did an awesome job ending it anyways 5/5
    take care,

    holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I was not expecting it to end that way. What an awesome twist! Sad that so many really do live life that way - even worse that some times it doesn't end so sweet! Incredible write Luanne.

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    Wow thats great it made me cry. great job keep it up.

    thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Wow! This is so nicely written! A wonderful poem & a great style of writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Wonderful poem I love the ending. the whole poem was great.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Wonderful poem I love the ending. the whole poem was great.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a wonderful poem. Very well written! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Perfect story. dramatic plots, and great ending...You are a wonderful story teller... Glad that I decided to read your poetry... I give you two thumbs up and a rating of a 5*

  • 17 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    Aww this is so good :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jabb

    Love it again 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by megan

    Hey thats an amazing poem.
    so sad.
    wut gave you the idea? did u actually know someone that that happened to? or was it you. msg me back
    goodjob keep it up :) :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    This was nice.. the ending was quite unexpected, it gave a sense of hope

  • 15 years ago

    by munkee04

    I've loved this poem ever since i first read it back in like 05-06 around that time... Its so cool the way you wrote it, and the last parts where her dad calls her just before shes about to kill herself, its awesome!

  • 15 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    OMG best poem on this website I swear to god so much emotion is in this poem i thought it would end so different omg omg omg I'm speechless I envy your work soooooooooooooo much !!

  • 15 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    OMG best poem on this website I swear to god so much emotion is in this poem i thought it would end so different omg omg omg I'm speechless I envy your work soooooooooooooo much !!

  • 14 years ago

    by BraidhairCutie

    Beautiful. :)