Comments : Waiting

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    Good job gurlie!! i luv it!! and guess what!! i can completely relate to it!! hehe...we both got what we wanted!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Hey, great poem duckie... who is it about? sheesh, i feel so left out of the loop now... so far away.... sigh
    5/5
    hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    B.E.A.U.tiful poem, keep up the great work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Theme excellent music an rythem ,as well. how you moved from a stanza to another was done in balance.

    wishing u all the best

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's so cute! ^_^ I loved it. The flow was nice, and the idea was great. Very well written, and you seem like a great writer. =) 5/5 xxoo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    I thought it was really sweet.
    There are a couple of spelling errors that need to be fixed, but apart from that you did a wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by molly

    Wow thats... great!

  • 15 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    I can almost relate. Although I havent really met my savior!

    made me realise how much I miss my love. Its sad, but its also a patience game.

    This describes it perfectly.
    thumbs up!