That is a really good poem gurl! im glad someone likes my poems. thanx

Nice rhyme...lol...I love it...I love it...I love it...man...I love this kind of poems...cause I can read it loud...hehe...lol...nice one hun...one of my fav...

Very good poem. I like it alot.

"are you there, or are you not" That's a good questions.

Often felt that way. Tears would gutter down my face and all people could do was sit and stare. What else should they do? I really don't know. But seeing them stare at me just hurts.

Then you really come to wonder "are you there, or are you not"?

Very powerfull. Well done.