Nice job

Nice job

Hey you, this is good, I like it. I gave you an excellent, hopefully some moron that doesn't know any better wont mess it up, check out some of my poems, their oddly similar to yours in some aspects

Hello hello, i think i see the most amazing, imaginative piece of artwork i haev read in a while.

i love how you told a story rather than explained an emotion.
a very nice change. so amny poems (as good as they are) are just complicated emotion that explains someones feelings and views. this is totally awesome! great work!!!

-Suzie

WOW this took an extrodinary imagination! =) Keep it up!

Wow this was extremly well written... i like how it all just flowed to together and it was very creative... keep it up...

sammie

Wow this is an awesome poem u used very good words and didnt force any whyming great job 5/5

I liked it I think the ending needs more of a bang to it tho, 5/5
thx for r/c on my poems!

Natalie

Awesome piece. So dark and great words used.
keep it up
tara xxx

Great work i loved it. I could see it so well in my head. You are great at doing that

Another fabulous poem by Ruby
great job
The garlic Teaser

I loved it. That is so beautiful and i could imagine it so perfectly. You drew a good picture with the words you wrote. Keep up the good work because you are really talented. *5/5*

Good poem
i like it it you have good flow in your poems
which is awesome
great job
keep it up
love always
tabby

Ruby,
oooo..scary.. this truly is a dark and dreery poem.but its really cool! i could never write a poem about a cave and have it sound half as good as this one! its crazy! but cool in the same sense. i thing. in the 2nd stanza it doesnt rhyme... its just that one tiny part that i think is below excellent!

♥Lauren

Scary but good!

Really great work! It all flowed together so well and you could realy feel the mood you set.. Nice One!