Its nice to write poems for other people and its rewarding aswell. I bet she loved it.

Hey! To answer your question, I am a song writer, I started that way and wasn't completely satisfied with my work and I thought if I came to a site like this with other writers and wrote poetry to help me with vocabulary and imagery it would do some good..Anyway though, the reason I came here was to return the favour of all your comments. thankyou very much for them, and as for your work, so far I really like it. The fact that a teacher asked you to do it and it wasn't something that you were caught up in yourself and were still able to write about it so well, that's awesome! I admire people who can do that, I'm going to read more and comment more when I get the time because I am interested to see what else you have to offer in your work. I can see that you are very talented. See 'round the site :)

Lol, that's sweet, i'm sure she liked it too? you did a grat job describing someone elses feelings.
luv em

It's so nice to do for others, it mean u are understandable, you kno wat is feel like, put da vision what she telling you abt herself and her relationship.. U just put it out and make it good.. I've wrote some for my friends that adore me in their thought of paper not to forget.. So this is pretty nicee.