Comments : Heartache and the Sea

  • 11 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Come on Bill...cheer up. I wanna feel your smile as I walk throught class (college)...everytime you smile I feel happiness in my heart...and this poem tells me that you're not smiling ^_^ You know there's people that truly love you and care about you...please, smile. Great poem tho 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Bill ,
    I really do not know what to say ...
    I am usually never at a loss for words but the tugging that this piece has done to my heart has left me speechless...
    I know there is no words that will make your feelings better and your sadness disappear ...
    I just hope that you can somehow find peace ...

    Always here for you my friend , Luanne

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Bill
    I'm lost for words....I'm so sorry!!! I'm sorry that your heart is breaking. I wish I could take the pain away but I can't...When my friends hurt so do I...You're in my thoughts and prayers. Love ya, Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by Lydia O

    I really admire your deft interweaving of the torment from pain and sadness with the calming influence from the wistful call of the sea. This was an exceptionally beautiful and yet haunting poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by JJ

    The emotion is so pure and deep, it just makes you cry. what else is there to say? I'm at lost for for words.... this is one of the best sad poems I've read. outstanding write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow this contains a lot of very deep emotion. Very well written and sad. Great job!