Good one keep it up

Well done all your poems are really good and the words describe the way you feel very well
keep it up
*bianca*

You've got good ideas, experiment with them, use some more punctuatuion (remember the way you say something can mean just as much as how you say it, same applies in poetry) and fix your spelling (eg. insane). Well keep on writing and good luck in the future.

Really good poem! Simple and clear! Nice job!

I can't believe you think that your poems are bad! This is so good. Good job :)

Mallori