The poem has a natural flow leading to an inspiratinal theme... I love it

Wow. Beautiful. Breathe taking. Haven't read anything like this. I loved it. It's excellent. Keep writin =) lotsaa love -xxx-

Beautiful imagery! The mood in this is so calm and serene, very nice! Keep it up~Holly

Enjoyed the imagery a lot and the movement of this piece.. The little rhymes you threw in seemed a bit feeble, and I think you'd benefit from not worrying too much about rhyming.. put more emphasis on flow and content.. But overall that's a very minor nitpick...

one crit: in line 11, since it's an adverb, it should be "in tranquility".. good read, definitely.. pZ out