HOLY CRAP Darien, that is one very breathtaking poem. Made my heart go pitter patter, thats for sure. Beautifully written, so touching and heartfelt, I could just picture everything you described........... what a loving and caring heart you have!
As I've mentionned before, I very much enjoy this poem. I love your writing you have such nice rhythm and flow which evokes emotion from the readers. I really loved the title! I'm bad with titles. Keep writing, I can't wait for your next one. *hug*
You my friend, are a true writer. perfect, pure emotion and feeling, a great rhyme and flow. 5/5 man, keep it up, I wish you and your band the best of luck, check out some of my poems if you get the chance. keep it up. -MC-