Comments : Shooting Stars and Fireflies

  • 11 years ago

    by firexflys

    Awwwwwwww my freaking goodness this is soo cute your amazing keep up the amazing work 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg! This poem is simply amazing.... it's so romantic and sweet and the rhyming pattern and flow was perfect! Awww *tear* I wanna find my one true friend! =) Great job on this

  • 11 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    Wow Darien that’s simply fantastic. Truly beautiful. I always have issues writing love poetry, I can’t seem to ever get it right. Maybe I’m just missing the proper inspiration in my life.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Beautiful, sweet, touching and cute... amazing poem. 5/5 Great job, always take care and keep it up...it was a awesome poem...specially those lines:

    I'm making wishes that I want come true.
    My favorite one is being here with you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    HOLY CRAP Darien, that is one very breathtaking poem. Made my heart go pitter patter, thats for sure. Beautifully written, so touching and heartfelt, I could just picture everything you described........... what a loving and caring heart you have!

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Well done Darien, a beautiful write my friend :)

  • 11 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    WOW! This poems was so amazing! Great job. Keep writting.
    ~Smiles~

  • 11 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    That is so beautiful, the words went together so nicely. so sweet!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jordan McGinness

    "Shooting stars and fireflies" explains what every one is thinking at that moment that you know your in love

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Hey that was really g0od. beautiful piece. well d0ne great j0b 0n it. great use 0f w0rds t0o. keep it up!! =)

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 11 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wow... great poem. I love it. I give you 5/5. Keep up the good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lori

    Beautiful
    that is all i have to say. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by kareeenuhhh

    Wow, simply wow. im amazed. beautiful piece of work.Wow!

  • 11 years ago

    by La Vie Boheme

    OMG i loved i wish i could write like you i have been trying for awhile now to write a love poem and i cant yours was B-E-A-U-TI-FUL

  • 11 years ago

    by latoya

    This is a good peom. Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    As I've mentionned before, I very much enjoy this poem. I love your writing you have such nice rhythm and flow which evokes emotion from the readers. I really loved the title! I'm bad with titles. Keep writing, I can't wait for your next one. *hug*

    -Kim

  • 11 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    You my friend, are a true writer. perfect, pure emotion and feeling, a great rhyme and flow. 5/5 man, keep it up, I wish you and your band the best of luck, check out some of my poems if you get the chance. keep it up. -MC-

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    Wow this poem was really good i loved it so much!!!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job....Darien...a beautiful write.

  • Oh my goodness another amazing poem ♥