Comments : He died from a brokenheart

  • 11 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow, this was really cute I really liked the end with the message to everyone Keep it up good-job

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenn

    It was really kool i liked it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by rebeccaxX

    This is sad but really good, keep it up, great job, 5* -becky

  • 11 years ago

    by disazngurllove

    I like its so good heheh but kinda sad but still good thanks
    marady

  • 11 years ago

    by disazngurllove

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ShayHope

    I love your poem, thanks for writing it, it was so inspiraring, would you mind checking out mine?? --- Yours Truely
    Shayna

  • 11 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    5/5
    it was really great
    keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I love this poem alot. i like poems like this.

  • 10 years ago

    by sezz

    Wow i really liked this one! so many good lines, u r really talented

  • 10 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Awww...i really felt the hurt from this poem : ( it was written very well keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by ali

    Awwww 5/5 def
    it was soo cute!!! it flows so perfectly and its written with such meaning and its soo easy to relate to. i really liked it, there are so many good expressions in it!!! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    Another beautiful poem!! its obvious you have talent....and i really like the message you gave out in this poem...you just won a spot in my favourites. im looking forward to reading more!!5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This is soooo sweet and sad all in one!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!!
    It's very good.
    I love it, especially the last paragraph.
    It is excellent advice.

  • 9 years ago

    by maggielou

    As much as i love this its kinda hard to read.

  • In some places I thought the flow was off a bit but I still have that trouble too. Excellent poem and very sad. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by jessie

    Great job i really enjoyed reading this poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    This poem is bueatiful!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow very powerful poem hunn i loved it you put a lot into it and the emotion was amazing 5/5 <33 *hang in there sweetie : ) *

  • 9 years ago

    by Fyri

    Thank you for writing such a touching poem. i can't tell you in words how good this poem is.