Comments : Dinner With Death

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Haha that was pretty good, definately unique, and I wouldn't have seen it coming if I tried. The rhyming was good the story was good, and the ending was enjoyable. Nice job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow nice poem, when i seen the name of the poem i was like umm then i seen it in the funny poems i was umm again nice job lol great flow 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Wow... interesting. very good. the end made me giggle a little. if every1 looked at "death" the way u do, maybe more ppl wud b happy. neways, very good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    I really really liked this poem ah! sooo much!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Very funny and well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This poem really lightened my spirits. I've been reading sad poems about death all day and It's more than refreshing to read one that takes a humorous tone to such a dismal topic. Great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Thank you for bringing a smile to my face.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was so funny. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Brilliant piece of wrk, def another 5 vote, I love the wording used, and the it just ncely flows keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Lmao i loved this poem!!!
    Totally unexpected, didn't think it would be a funny one when you asked me to comment it, i really enjoyed reading it, makes a change from the usual ones i read. Brilliant and a definate 5/5 from me, flowed well and the rhyming was spot on. I especially liked the ending about the PTA haha :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    AHAHAHAHAHA!
    This had me in giggles while reading it.
    I loved the ending, I wasn't expecting it to be that.
    This was very original, when I saw the title you asked me to comment I thought it was going to be a sad or dark poem I didn't expect it to be a funny one, but you did a marvelous job!