Comments : Discontent

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    I like it a lot. The beginning I wasnt to fond with, maybe it was just the message of which it spoke, but it grew on me as a whole

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    I agree the poem gets more interesting as it progresses. A positive point about this piece is that it could relate to any country or person.

    Keep writing
    Nici