Wow i love this poem geat job 5/5
Leona

Omg this seriously has to be one of the coolest peoms I've read. Very unique beautifully written. You've got some major talent on your hands. =) Keep up the EXCELLENT work.
xoxo

Oh wow cool, I just love it....Very unique and perfecly written...

Keep it up hunni

Much Love Sabrina

Im not much into the vampire thing but perhaps add a little more it seemed somehow missing a piece or two

This is an unusual blend of creepy ghoulish and sensuality all rolled into one. A very intersting piece of work which I enjoyed reading.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Wow this is very interesting... but i like it!

Great poem shows the main meaning of vamps it is truly five by five.

Totally awesome

Wow... you tried something different... and it worked out! I was able to imagine everything perfectly. Great job 5/5

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~ Tina

Wow, this was good, i liked the idea behind it. This is very well written.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Oh i love it!

Cool, there is not much else to say about it...just cool

That was like awsumness man, i really liked it!!

I really liked this, I love the idea of vampires, and it's great to see them written of in such a way. Well done 5/5
*VioletRaven*

Cool very different but still cool.
Keep up the good work

Hey, this poem is awesome. i'm totally in to the whole neck biting vampiric love thing. anywho, great poem. ciao~lyn

I loved it. it paints a great pic. it was beauitful. great work

Emma 5/5

Sweeeet

WOOO I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work chica, c ya at skewl!!!! 5/5

Hey your poem was awesome and i love vampire poems and this is one of the good ones! keep it up!