Comments : Working on a title still

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaime

    Powerful words, you chose them well.

  • 11 years ago

    by britt

    Very excellent poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    You did a really good job in choosing out the vocabulary.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I really like this poem, the words are so strong, I can't really think of a title to tell you, and I don't really have anything to say, this was a great poem, that I really enjoyed, I just wish it could be longer. Thank you for sharing this poem. Please keep up the good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I don't know, I'm weird...maybe Soldier of the Stardust

    or

    Farawy Dawn.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Wingless

    *Faraway

  • 11 years ago

    by Tiller

    Very good..i like the way you chose your words

  • 11 years ago

    by michele deluca

    Impressive..totally unique concept I really like it. Awesome job keep up the good work