Yes this poem is good. You had a different rhyming scheme. I love it when people stray from the rules its the best thing in the world. I don't really know what to say I really liked this poem. I read it a few times. But I have to admit, it was a struggle, because I absolutely hate the color scheme of the friendship section, it really reminds me of barf.
Good job though, I like this poem.
And for some reason, this stanza/verse/whateevr you want to call it
Wow. i ADORE IT. hahaa. well. *blushes* am i allowed to take it and try to put music to it? its really beautiful. hahahaha. and .. just felt lik asking ur permission first xP but its realli realli nice. 5/5
I thought it was wonderful. I love the way it flowed together. Sometimes I have problems getting mine to rhyme just right. Can you read through some of them and let me know what you think? It would be highly appreciated! Thanks!