Comments : Old love, new friend

  • 11 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    This poem is truely amazing!! I hope everything works out for you.. I love how you really put your heart into it.. This is certainly a 5/5 Great job!!!
    !^I Love Being In Love^!

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved it. the best part to me was....
    You said it would be weird
    Which is just what I feared
    But I know we can work it out
    And that, I have no doubt
    That is so powerful. keep it up.
    Emma 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cari

    Great job! i loved it. its really full of emotion... nice work!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Loved it! really goooooood work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Loulou

    This is an awesome poem you are a wonderful writer and i am gald you are on this website i enjoy reading more from you so keep writing

    love always tabby

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Your sentiment was delivered with a flawless flow

  • 11 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    This poem has a unique style that I love!

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    The feeelings are very well conveyed and the poem flows really well

  • 11 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Hey this is really good, I really liked this...thnx for commentin on mine...u did real good...keep them comin...

    ::MELI::

  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    Exactly the point im at right now......i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Jonathan

    I had to read the second line twice but then I understood what the idea was. The rythm of the poem is very good. overall a good poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Honest sentiment with a nice flow

  • 11 years ago

    by Lexie

    Different poem, but i really liked it. Good Job!!!! It's good to know that people can still be friends after a breakup.

  • 11 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Great poem. i'm glad you can still be friends with him. i know some people who make that impossible. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hareem

    Nice poem, I like it all but the 2nd line in the last stanza...well the purpose of that question is too vague, I'd say.
    Nevertheless, the poem has a fine sentimental atmosphere.
    Love & Wishes.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Yes this poem is good. You had a different rhyming scheme. I love it when people stray from the rules its the best thing in the world. I don't really know what to say I really liked this poem. I read it a few times. But I have to admit, it was a struggle, because I absolutely hate the color scheme of the friendship section, it really reminds me of barf.

    Good job though, I like this poem.

    And for some reason, this stanza/verse/whateevr you want to call it

    sticks out from all the other ones.

  • 11 years ago

    by Newbie

    Wow. i ADORE IT. hahaa. well. *blushes* am i allowed to take it and try to put music to it? its really beautiful. hahahaha. and .. just felt lik asking ur permission first xP but its realli realli nice. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Wowzers (haha I hate that word) I liked that, I would stay friends with my x's... if I had one...

  • 11 years ago

    by *~*Gina*~*

    I loved it, i can tell it came fom the heart. I really hope things work out. Thanx for commenting on my poem. I hope to see a lot more of your poems. ur a great writer!
    Smile Always,
    Gina

  • 11 years ago

    by Always4You

    I thought it was wonderful. I love the way it flowed together. Sometimes I have problems getting mine to rhyme just right. Can you read through some of them and let me know what you think? It would be highly appreciated! Thanks!