Comments : Time for bed

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    :(
    i wish i could take it all away!!
    im here for you no matter what
    HEY!!!! .... i didnt write them to be used a coaster missy :P hehe
    love u always xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This one short but still effective
    it's almost like you don't care about the person who wrote the letter anymore
    but you leave things around to remind you of them anyway
    contradicting but it works

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. this is fantastic. I love it. Beautiful that it starts with "lights on and ends with Lights out" Very powerful.

    Dam.. Urgh.. Why am I so dam speechless ? Your like Kirsty, you don't just take my breath away but also my words.. damn you! hahaha -just kiddin--

    Love ya sweety -xxx- and i love your writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Awesome wording the the first couple lines

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    A sad poem that is beautiful in its own special way.
    Bravo, bravo......

    Josh