This is so heartbreaking, but beautifully conveyed! Great poem!

I'm in total agreement with Melissa.. A really heartbreaking poem, but wonderfull written :)

You have such an amazing way with words....you are an incredible poet. Beautifully written.

Wonderful poem. You definitely have talent
Well done

Wow, this one is really powerful..spl the selection of words, great poem indeed. lovely flow
5/5
take care and all the best

This is a really exelent poem . i loved it