Comments : Deathly Awakening

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    AwW that was so sad. it was really amazing. take care
    xoxo
    Megan

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    "People die - old and young, healthy and ill
    No one can beat it, no one will"

    Powerful message, it really hit hard. You're a talented writer, good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    That's lovely. Poems like this are relatable by everyone and the reason that YOU are on my favorites list.

  • 18 years ago

    by MBG

    This was an awsome poem alot of passion and it woke me up to....good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hey, I like this poem. you're poems are so great. Umm I like the format of the poem. I really like the length. The rhyming scheme is different, but it's cool. Usually, for double stanzas, the rhyming scheme is

    A
    B
    A
    B but you did

    A
    A
    B
    B

    Cool, it's nice to see changes and modifications to the rules.. Good job being an unorthadoxed poet.