WOW!!!
this is your best yet
theres so much emotion behind it
i felt so many different emotions and the hate behind it
this is some powerful writing
i missed reading your greast stuff
welcome back baby
keep it up
loves ya xxxxxxxx

Wow, I love your voice in this! So powerfully said and very well expressed!

"Will this enemy I carry inside become my friend?" I love this line!

Excellent write!

Waow...did is a wiked poem man...its wiked n sad..duno wat to say...left me speechles...gr8 use of wrds...keep it up!

This is a awesome poem and this is how i felt with my ex who just commited suiside. Now that he is gone all i feel is the hurt of how all those things dont matter anymore because i just want him back.
ANyways good job
Nichole Renee
Oh dont forget to comment on one of my poems

Gosh Mona. I love this poem. I had this feeling for about 4 months straight. and i am amazingly sorry it is happening to you because it is horrible. I aboslutely love ur writing though, and i am so glad i found you. Excellent poem, darling, i hope you feel better soon. Love you

WOW !!!
babe im speachless!!
that's an incredibly awesome poem..Im so PROUD:)
lol..you've always been great, you could tell, but this poem just blew me away.
SO much emotion, the vocab was great and i am just so in awe by the way my heart is racing even now!
lol..
Take care huni
lots of love
xoxoxox

Aww mona! I hope it's not true...excellent poem though, it just fit perfectly...stay strong hunn -xxx-

Aww this is kool. It's really very emotional adn headstrong. i dunno if this is actual fact for you or not, but you write like you mean it. it's amazing.

Suzie

Beautiful,
Just like all of your poems Mona.
I love it and it expresses your feelings so well that I almost feel what you were feeling when you were writig this poem....
Beautiful....