I really like this one, but I cant really explain why. I like how you start out with a little girl and when she grows up she realizes things. I really love it when your form your poems into a story like pose. Awesome work!

This is so beautiful and sad!

"They do die, though, and she'll
find that out soon enough. She'll find out that
horses die, farms get sold,
Grandpa gets sick, and Grandma gets old,
all while she learns to understand."

I LOVE this stanza, everything about it! Beautiful writing!