Oh god.....im printing this one out for further reading
Lately I've been given a really hard time.
actually it was today.....
Could you please read my 2 new poems, critically cause i feel i have no talent or gift or anything in this poetry
thing....or ever did
because of what someone said

thank you for sharing your talent ruby
Love
Emma

It's like a song. one of thsoe deep, emotional, heavy on ur heart songs. It's Fabulous! (said in gayish voice taht i so adore)

Wow.. I magificent read. I loved it.

--James~ 5/5 Keep writing!

Oh i like this! I take it it's about a girl who lost a boy, And he died, And then she took her own life. 5/5 Great poem! =]

luv natz x0x

I loved the second to the last stanza. it just spoke to me. i guess it was so packed with emotion. all around a great poem. nice job.
Emma 5/5

5/5!

Such a sad poem, and one that many people can relate to. Keep it up.

Peace. [Sole]

This is soo sad. and so beautiful. keep it up

Very powerfully written with great use of vocab imegry and expression

5/5

As I said I did print it out and have read it a millions time over and over.
Im still not sick of it!
love
~Em

This is the first poem that somebody asked me to read from that thread that I actually thought was unique enough and strong enough to carry a message throughout the entire poem. It was enough to keep a reader's attention and draw them in from the start. It flowed really well. I really am amazed.

Hey, really loved the rhyme sceme here.. great work!!!

Stunning, Just stunningly amazing. I loved it. I actually enjoyed every poem I've read so far. So that's is really good. :)

I love this poem, strong and flowing. I love the way it reminds me of Ye Old Style Speech :p. It's also amazingly written in that the reader can truly feel the pain and despair coming alive for them. Great Job!