Heya... thanx for commenting my poetry!!
i suffer from insomnia as well so i know how you feel... that describes the feeling really well...

Demons demons,
of my mind.
Please let me sleep,
in peace,
tonight.

Tight poem...I love the feeling and sadness in it. thanks for commenting on my poem, finally someone out there gets what I am about!! thanks again

Kool poem 5/5

Hey there. very powerful poem. I'm not going to lie to you though and say I enojoyed it lol. it's so close to stuff that I went through just a little while ago. I can't bear the thought that sombody else could go through these kinds of thoughts. *hugs* but it was really well written and an amazing piece of poetry... keep it up keep it up... awesome!!!

I know how you feel being an insomniac, so i guess i can relate to that poem. It was really powerful, heartfelt. Thank you for your comment on my poem! 5/5
Helen