Your unconstant rhythm makes it hard to read I gave you a 3/5 because even though it was hard to read it still seemed heartfelt and there was some good things about it such as the grammer and what not

I actually really enjoyed reading this poem. i infact DO like the rhyme unlike that previous comment lol i think it added to the poem. this poem shows ur kind heart of wanting to help ur friend even though u feel it wasnt appreciated..i dont knoe if this is based on true events but if it is, i hope things work out!:)