Wow this poem was soo awesome! the wording and the emotions were awesome too! awesome awesome job!

HEY RUBY!
I felt this poem reach out to me!
It's freaky how you read exactly how you feel.
If this is about you in any way though you have me to talk to.
I LOVE YOU RUBY!
!EMMA!

Wow this was was amazing very nice love it xoxo rach

"Drifting though the day
Conversing as usual
Ignoring what she feels inside
Putting up her facade"

That was really good, I must say it kept me on my seat, it made me want to read about this drifting woman.

Good work Ruby

Very strong feelings in this and very wel expressed.

5/5

I loved this poem. i is diffrent i mean kinda i dont know it just stands out to me. nice job.
Emma 5/5

Ruby,
Not my favorite. i didnt like the fact that some stanzas rhymed and others didnt. it threw mye off a little. was about halfway through and it rhymed so i had to scroll up to see if it rhymed all the, rhymed..i like both poems that rhyme and those that dont but i reall ydont care for ones that do both and not on a structed basis. sorry. i like the theme though. its nice to read a poem about just not caring instead of 'i hate my life kill me not im so sad and depressed..wahh waaaa' lol.

♥Lauren

Good job 5/5. Short sentences but held alot of emotion within them! Your truly talented =] Stay that way ^_^

- natz x-x-x

5/5!

Im sorry but Im really not feeling this one at all.. just not one of your best...