Very nice alot of emotion i thk keep it up xx tasha xx 5/5

I agree, you put alot of emotion into your poems, i really love to read them. 5/5 ~ash

Great poem. you had a great flow, and the language used was very sofisticated. thanks for the comments

Ruby

Thnx for the comment of my poem, just been readin some of yours this one and the called that night are both great, wish i cud wirte them as good as u. thnx again xx

Very deep in my opinnon, i love it.

Very emotional But i love em that way keep it up girl!

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Rach

Creepy poem...totaly agree...life seem so meaningless...i love it!;)

That was great i loved it