I can relate to this poem 100%...well i can relatre to them almost most of the time because i have gone thru what you have gone through some time in my lifetime...i just hope you r not hurting a lot because it hurts to hurt....well take care and keep writing
The poems that you think "suck" are incredible...even if this is the simplest poem you have it's awesome...it flowed perfectly ...it seems so damn easy for you...like you don't even have to think about it at all...to achieve that is truly impressive. Nicely done!!
i could totally relate to this! i read it and i was like
"ohh i remeber those days with that guy.." and how hard it was to say goodbye. well its been like a 5 months and i still L.o.v.e him..and i really dont want to
lol ok im done explaing my problems!