Comments : What I've Kept Inside

  • 11 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    O_O hehe...cHeEr uP..~ hopE u,suggesting to just befriends with him is not a bad choice..~ ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    OO..btw,LovE the poeM~ hehe..your're very good at writing poems..so admire yOu..~ ^^ 10/5 ^^ its toO gOod to be just fivE..~ ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Shane

    A reflection of inner despair.
    Sadly i've been there.
    Only time may prove to tear,
    that forgotten pair..

    lol when I read something that I relate to well I sorta start doing that, it's a tough thing unrequited love.

    I find the most difficult thing about it is missing all their imperfections when you know they are there somewhere. Turning a blind eye is simply easier.

  • I can relate to this poem 100%...well i can relatre to them almost most of the time because i have gone thru what you have gone through some time in my lifetime...i just hope you r not hurting a lot because it hurts to hurt....well take care and keep writing
    much love

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    WHOA!!! This poem has blown me so far away! Girl, I'm speechless. I mean, I'm trying to think of words to say and there are none, just-WHOA!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O hunny!!! I know just what you're dealing with!! be strong!! I know how much that sux!!!

    love always!!
    ~xAmandax~

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    Omg omg omg i loved it so much it made me cry because you know i feel the same way!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wonderful.........its so touching dear.
    keep it up.....5/5

    Bharti

  • 11 years ago

    by Impulsive Victoria

    Your poem dont suck its really good

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece uve expressed urself well keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie84

    The poems that you think "suck" are incredible...even if this is the simplest poem you have it's awesome...it flowed perfectly ...it seems so damn easy for you...like you don't even have to think about it at all...to achieve that is truly impressive. Nicely done!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Oshabell

    I love your poem and I know exactly what you meant because i'm going through the same thing right now!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by belle163

    Hey is this nikki, if it is this is awesome i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by katie

    Omggg
    i could totally relate to this! i read it and i was like
    "ohh i remeber those days with that guy.." and how hard it was to say goodbye. well its been like a 5 months and i still L.o.v.e him..and i really dont want to
    lol ok im done explaing my problems!
    i

  • 11 years ago

    by Shan

    Oh my gosh!! This is one of the BEST poems i've ever read!!! I love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    That was wonderful dear!
    so deep and heart touching.......5/5

    take care
    Bharti

  • 11 years ago

    by Kesha

    Wow, it's the best. I love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Hey thanx for commenting on my poem
    let me say this poem does not suck none of them do very well written poems is to let emotions out
    take care
    HS

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*LoveHurts*~

    OMG This is great I love this poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*LoveHurts*~

    I noe exactly how u feel wich is why i love this poem!