Kooooool. As usual i adore ur style adn i love ur langauge. Rock on and keep writing amazing poetry!

Suzie

You know that Grease song? well ' i got chills theyre multiplying!' that was me while reading this poem! it was so i dont even know how to say it.. i just really liked it. i just do. sarry about this being a lame comment but i have nothing bad to say!
♥Lauren

Really good poems, I love it how you had "And she burns" and so on, After each verse. It all fitted in quite well! 5/5 =]

- natz x0x

One of your best!

Great poem - I love the last line of each stanza, and the way it builds up to the last line.

Peace. [Sole]

Nice poem good use of repetition xx ALLY xx

Beautiful, really. It's nice to read a poem that's not just words but something you can actually "see". The repetition was pretty good. The organization is so nice.

Beautifully written poem. I loved it. Keep up the amazing work.

~Joe~

Hmm... Mysterious, yet interesting vibe to this poem, there is not more i can say

Wow, a beautiful piece, 5/5
~Em

WOW, maybe not one of your best, but it was still very powerfull!!!!

Amazing poem! It's beautifully written and the theme is a unique one.

Good job! 5/5

Lovely poem yet again, great imagery. I really enjoyed read it. It was a lovely poem, and I thought it was creative aswell.

This is one of the coolest poems ive read!! its AWESOME!!
i love the style/rhyme scheme(aaab, cccd) and having the last line dramtically shorter/. this is o wicked cool! the flow was great and it made me not stop throught the whole poem.
5/5 no doubt about it‼

x.x:Lauren