Comments : Hes The Only One (Acrostic)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    It can be difficult sometimes to write, but you did a nice job. My only question is in regards to using the word "Over" at the start of the 3rd stanza. It just doesn't seem to go with the theme. Cheers!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey, don't listen to what that girl said ^^
    your poem was good. that style of writing is cool.
    good poem
    -lauren