This poem is really good! it sounds alot like something i just wrote earlier this week. nice job!!

Oh my goodness *tear*..if this poem did not describe my current status with my best friend I don't know what will...Uhh it hurts doesn't it?! Its been two weeks since I talked to my best friend over a STUPID fight and I hate it! It hurts me like crazy although I try and act all strong..I'm so sorry about whatever friendship you lost...other then a death in the family loseing a close friend causes so much pain! I really enjoyed this right though! You kept the structure going very well!
5/5
CHelsey-Lynn
p.s. Thanks for commenting on my poem!