I can relate

This is good. This is funny. This does indeed a poetic description of a whole train of thought I myself have experienced......Bravo.

I liked this!!!! well done!
lizzie
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sorry I dont really find this particular poem appealing. One of the reasons being how you have what seems to be random sentances out of the blue that dont seem to make sence. Or maybe it is my youth that defies me. But ignorence I cannot help.